Little Man / Scene 2
Graduation dinner
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Location: Restaurant, celebration atmosphere
Marcus: 21, confident, ready to take on the world
David: Proud but with undertone of letting go
UNCLE PETE: So Marcus, what's the plan? Corner office by thirty?
MARCUS: (laughing) Something like that. I've got interviews lined up in the city. Three different companies want to meet with me.
SARAH: (to David) Our boy, the hotshot.
DAVID: (watching Marcus's animated face) Just seems like yesterday he was asking me to help him tie his shoes.
MARCUS: Dad, you're getting all nostalgic on me.
DAVID: Am I?
MARCUS: Yeah, you get this look. Like you're watching a movie instead of living real life.
DAVID: Maybe I am. Maybe that's what happens when you get old. Everything starts feeling like a movie you've seen before.
MARCUS: You're not old, Dad.
DAVID: (slight pause) No, I guess not. But you're not young anymore either.
Awkward beat, family not sure how to respond
SARAH: (breaking tension) More wine, anyone?
Later, private moment in parking lot
MARCUS: Dad, are you okay? You seemed... I don't know, sad tonight.
DAVID: Not sad, son. Just... aware.
MARCUS: Aware of what?
DAVID: How fast it goes. How one day you're teaching someone to tie their shoes, and the next day they're graduating college and moving to the big city.
MARCUS: I'm not moving to Mars, Dad. The city's two hours away.
DAVID: I know. I know that. It's just...
MARCUS: What?
DAVID: (struggling for words) I used to be able to fix everything for you. Skinned knee, bad dream, mean kid at school. Now you're going out into a world where I can't protect you from everything.
MARCUS: Dad, you taught me how to protect myself.
DAVID: (emotion in voice) Did I? Did I really?
MARCUS: Yeah, Dad. You did. Every single day for twenty-one years.
They embrace, David holding on just a moment too long
DAVID: I'm proud of you, Marcus. More proud than you'll ever understand.
MARCUS: I love you too, Dad.
Revision notes for this chapter2 open · all notes
- continuityMarcus is 21 at graduation but dies at 19
The graduation dinner makes Marcus 21 and has him graduating college ("Every single day for twenty-one years"). The concept and character profiles say he dies at 19, and the story structure places the graduation at 18 (high school). Either change his age at death or turn the dinner into a high school graduation.
- structureThe first two scenes break the reverse order
The film runs backwards, but the posted order puts the driving lesson at 16 before the graduation dinner at 21. In reverse chronology the graduation comes first.