Little Man / Scene 1
Driving lesson
Heads up: this one deals with grief and the death of a child.
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Location: Empty parking lot, Sunday afternoon
Marcus: 16, nervous energy
David: Patient but alert
DAVID: Easy on the gas there, son. Think of it like... like you're waking up your mom on Saturday morning.
MARCUS: (nervous laugh) What's that supposed to mean?
DAVID: Gentle. Careful. One wrong move and you're in trouble.
Marcus jerks the car forward, brakes too hard
MARCUS: Dammit! Sorry, Dad, I didn't mean to—
DAVID: Language. And it's okay. You know why they call it learning?
MARCUS: Why?
DAVID: Because you don't know how to do it yet. If you already knew, we'd call it something else.
Long pause as Marcus adjusts mirrors
MARCUS: Dad? Were you scared when you first drove?
DAVID: Terrified. Your grandfather made me practice in this same parking lot, actually. Different shopping center, same idea.
MARCUS: Really?
DAVID: Stalled out seventeen times in one afternoon. He just sat there, patient as a saint. Never raised his voice once.
MARCUS: What did he say?
DAVID: He said, "Son, this car doesn't care if you're scared. But I do. So let's figure this out together."
Marcus successfully makes a smooth turn
MARCUS: Did you see that?!
DAVID: (genuine pride) I saw it. You're getting it. Want to know a secret?
MARCUS: What?
DAVID: The car wants to go straight. All you have to do is convince it to turn when you need it to. Most of the time, it'll cooperate.
MARCUS: Like people?
DAVID: (surprised by the insight) Yeah, Marcus. Exactly like people.
Revision notes for this chapter2 open · all notes
- structureThe first two scenes break the reverse order
The film runs backwards, but the posted order puts the driving lesson at 16 before the graduation dinner at 21. In reverse chronology the graduation comes first.
- continuity"This same parking lot... different shopping center"
David says his father taught him in "this same parking lot, actually," then in the next breath "Different shopping center, same idea." Pick one.