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Alas, Dreamland / Chapter 1

The Fire and The Fight

May 27, 1911 - 2:47 AM

Hell Gate burned while two men who had avoided each other for seven years collided in the mud and smoke of Dreamland’s death.

George’s left fist found James’s jaw without warning—his only fist now, the right arm gone these five years since Caesar collected his due. They collapsed into rain-soaked earth between burning attractions—seven years of watching, five years of phantom pain, all dissolved in raw need.

“You couldn’t leave her alone!” George’s voice was raw from smoke, raw from years of watching. “You had to make me watch you steal her!”

James tasted blood and rolled clear of the next blow. Around them, Dreamland screamed its death—wooden beams cracking like bones, glass exploding in heat, the Beacon Tower’s light flickering desperate signals into smoke-black sky.

They grappled in mud, stripped to what they’d always been beneath civility’s careful machinery. George fought with the fury of the maimed—using his weight, his legs, the stump of his right arm as a club. James had two hands but George had five years of learning to be deadly with half a body. Neither precise, neither honorable—one broken man and one whole, fighting over a woman who belonged to neither.

“She was never yours to steal,” James gasped, breaking the chokehold, landing his own punch that split George’s lip.

Lightning—or another electrical explosion—illuminated them: covered in mud and ash, bleeding from wounds, still locked together as the incubator building’s windows cracked behind them.

“The babies!” Minnie’s scream cut through everything—the roar of flames, the crash of collapsing structures, the sound of two men trying to destroy each other. “The babies are still inside!”

Both men froze, her voice achieving what violence couldn’t. They looked at each other, then at the incubator building where twelve impossible lives waited behind failing glass.

Another explosion—Hell Gate’s final mechanical scream. Burning debris rained like judgment. Mud steamed beneath them.

George’s eyes found James’s through the smoke. Something passed between them then—not forgiveness, which would come later if it came at all, but the recognition that comes when men realize they’ve been living parallel lives. The one-armed lion tamer who’d lost everything piece by piece, and the two-armed engineer who’d never quite grasped what he wanted. Both loving the same woman badly, both failing her in different ways, both now facing the same simple choice.

The building’s windows shattered.

Inside, babies who’d fought to breathe from their first moments now faced smoke and flame. Inside, the woman they’d fought over tried to save them all.

“Together?” George asked, blood streaming from his mouth.

“Together,” James agreed, already pushing himself up from the mud.

They ran toward the burning building, no longer enemies but not yet allies—two men who’d finally learned what mattered when everything else was burning. Behind them, their blood dissolved into rain and mud, washed clean by the storm that arrived too late to save the park but might still save what they should have protected all along.

The incubator building’s door was an orange mouth of flame.

They plunged through it anyway.

Earlier version of this chapterFirst draft, July 2025

May 27, 1911 - 2:47 AM

Hell Gate was burning, and two men who had circled each other for seven years finally collided in the mud and smoke of Dreamland’s death.

The punch came from nowhere—George’s fist connecting with James’s jaw as fire ate the sky behind them. They went down hard in the rain-soaked earth between burning attractions, seven years of careful distance erased in an instant of violence.

“You couldn’t leave her alone!” George’s voice raw from smoke, raw from years of watching. “You had to make me watch you steal her!”

James tasted blood, rolled to avoid the next blow. Around them, Dreamland screamed its death—wooden beams cracking like bones, glass exploding in the heat, the Beacon Tower’s light flickering its last desperate signals into smoke-black sky.

They grappled in the mud, two men reduced to their basest selves while a city of dreams burned around them. George’s hands found James’s throat. James’s knee found George’s ribs. Neither clean, neither noble, just two animals fighting over territory already lost.

“She was never yours to steal,” James gasped, breaking the chokehold, landing his own punch that split George’s lip.

Lightning—or perhaps just another electrical explosion—illuminated them for an instant: covered in mud and ash, bleeding from various wounds, still locked together while behind them the incubator building’s windows began to crack from heat.

“The babies!” Minnie’s scream cut through everything—the roar of flames, the crash of collapsing structures, the sound of two men trying to destroy each other. “The babies are still inside!”

Both men froze, her voice achieving what violence couldn’t. They looked at each other, then at the incubator building where sixteen impossible lives waited behind glass that wouldn’t hold much longer.

Another explosion—Hell Gate’s final mechanical scream. Burning debris rained down like judgment. The mud beneath them steamed from the heat.

George’s eyes met James’s. Something passed between them—not forgiveness, not yet, but recognition. Recognition that they were the same: men who loved the same woman, who’d failed in different ways, who now faced the same choice.

The building’s windows shattered.

Inside, babies who’d fought to breathe from their first moments now faced smoke and flame. Inside, the woman they’d fought over was trying to save them all.

“Together?” George asked, blood streaming from his mouth.

“Together,” James agreed, already pushing himself up from the mud.

They ran toward the burning building, no longer enemies but not yet allies—just two men who understood that some things mattered more than their pain. Behind them, their blood mixed with rain and mud, washed away by the storm that had come too late to save Dreamland but might—might—be enough to save what mattered most.

The incubator building’s door was an orange mouth of flame.

They plunged through it anyway.