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Alas, Dreamland

At Coney Island's Dreamland in 1904, a nurse who keeps premature babies alive in glass incubators is caught between the lion tamer she's promised to and the quiet electrician who notices everything, while the park burns its way toward the fire of 1911.

Two people walking the Coney Island boardwalk past the Wonder Wheel on a gray morning.
Status
Complete draft, revising
Length
158,701 words · about 12 hours
This draft
Complete draft, August 2025

Dreamland opened before the paint dried: a million electric bulbs, a tower you could see for miles, a ride called Hell Gate, and, between the lions and the roller coasters, Dr. Couney's exhibit of real premature babies in glass boxes, a quarter to look. Minnie Thompson is the nurse who keeps them breathing. She's engaged to George Dressler, the German lion tamer whose act anchors the park, and she has learned to hold her breath every time the cage door closes behind him.

Then James Harris arrives to keep the wiring alive. He's careful and quiet, carrying his dead brother's stopped watch and a name that isn't quite his own. Over seven seasons of storms, winter repairs, bad money and one lion that won't forgive anybody, the three of them circle each other in a place built to look permanent and made of fresh lumber and electricity. The book opens on the night it all burns. The rest is how they got there.

Heads up: this book deals with fire and disaster, serious injury and amputation, alcoholism, grief, the illness and death of infants.

CONTENTS84 chapters
  1. PrologueThe Discovery
  2. Chapter 1The Fire and The Fightearlier draft
  3. Chapter 2The Roarearlier draft
  4. Chapter 3Night Rounds
  5. Chapter 4The Arrival
  6. Chapter 5First Spark
  7. Chapter 6The Elephant Hotel
  8. Chapter 7The King's Court
  9. Chapter 8Mechanical Hearts
  10. Chapter 9The Public and Private
  11. Chapter 10The Past
  12. Chapter 11Caesar's Warning
  13. Chapter 12The Thunderstorm
  14. Chapter 13Fighting the Flames
  15. Chapter 14Performance Review
  16. Chapter 15The Lilliputian's Wisdom
  17. Chapter 16Swimming in Electric Light
  18. Chapter 17Trip to the Moon
  19. Chapter 18The Proposal
  20. Chapter 19Witness
  21. Chapter 20The Infant Incubators at Night
  22. Chapter 21Winter Maintenance
  23. Chapter 22Spring Returns
  24. Chapter 23The New Procedure
  25. Chapter 24Earthquake News
  26. Chapter 25Lilliputian Village
  27. Chapter 26The Tango
  28. Chapter 27The Dance Halls
  29. Chapter 28Caesar's Rebellion
  30. Chapter 29Night Medicine
  31. Chapter 30The Letter
  32. InterludeElizabeth's Night Duty
  33. Chapter 31Shoot the Chutes
  34. Chapter 32The Lilliputian Wedding
  35. Chapter 33The Bowery
  36. Chapter 34Couney's Diagnosis
  37. Chapter 35The Arm
  38. Chapter 36New Jersey Calling
  39. Chapter 37Feltman's
  40. Chapter 38Richardson's Proposition
  41. Chapter 39The Unraveling
  42. Chapter 40The Dragon's Gorge
  43. Chapter 41Hope's Crisis
  44. Chapter 42Winter Ultimatum
  45. Chapter 43Christmas Choices
  46. Chapter 44Winter Storm
  47. Chapter 45Steeplechase
  48. InterludeDr. Couney's Presentation
  49. Chapter 46Professional Authority
  50. Chapter 47Emergency Leadership
  51. Chapter 48Innovation Initiative
  52. Chapter 49Future Planning
  53. Chapter 50Public Recognition
  54. Chapter 51The Airship Building
  55. Chapter 52The Boardwalk Prophet
  56. Chapter 53Summer Diseases
  57. Chapter 54Luna Park
  58. Chapter 55Couney's Last Lesson
  59. InterludeCharlie's Last Rounds
  60. Chapter 56Professional Distance
  61. Chapter 57Winter Planning
  62. Chapter 58The Panic of 1908
  63. Chapter 59The Whip
  64. Chapter 60Reduced Circumstances
  65. Chapter 61The Charity Case
  66. Chapter 62The Last Season
  67. Chapter 63One Last Tour
  68. Chapter 64Fighting the Flames
  69. Chapter 65Hell Gate
  70. InterludeRichardson's Reckoning
  71. Chapter 66The Haunted Swing
  72. Chapter 67Animal Instincts
  73. Chapter 68Creation
  74. Chapter 69The Lilliputian Village Says Goodbye
  75. Chapter 70Summer Heat
  76. Chapter 71Labor Day Collapse
  77. Chapter 72Winter Preparations
  78. Chapter 73Spring 1911 - Final Season Begins
  79. Chapter 74George's Warning
  80. Chapter 75The Day Before
  81. Chapter 76The Fire Begins
  82. Chapter 77Redemption in Flames
  83. Chapter 78The Morning After
  84. EpilogueAll the Premature Thingsearlier draft
Version history2 drafts

Current · August 2025

Complete draft

The full book, framed by Minnie's recovered journals. George now starts with both arms and loses one to Caesar in 1906, the opening frame of an archivist finding the journals was added, and the ending moved from a Miami Beach reunion scene to the historian closing the last journal.

Earlier · July 2025

First draft

Three chapters that survive from the first draft: the fire-night opening, the first night in the lion arena, and the original Miami Beach epilogue. In this draft George has already lost his arm when the story begins.

3 chapters · 2,884 words. Where a chapter survived into the current draft, its earlier version sits in an accordion at the bottom of that chapter's page.